How sensitive are newspapers these days about errors? If the response by the Kansas City Star’s sports editor to a glaring error in a recent sports story is any indication, very, very sensitive.
It should be noted that reporters often get in trouble when story errors are pointed out by readers and the newspaper is forced to print a correction. In fact, you can lose your job if too many errors are made.
Savvy PR pros know that demanding a correction to a story can have major consequences. If you want to have an ongoing relationship with a reporter making him/her print a correction for all the world to see is not the way to do it. It would be like you making an accounting error at your company and having it broadcast to the world.
In my book, “Confessions of a Corporate Sycophant” I told the story of where I pointed out to a reporter a major error in a story (he had misspelled the name of my client throughout the article). Rather than demand an immediate correction as my client was demanding, the reporter agreed to write a feature about the client in the future.
It was a win-win. The reporter didn’t have to admit his mistake and my client received a glowing story a few months later.
Malcom Haney is a former Kansas City Star sales employee and admitted golf nut who started the McClatchy-owned paper’s Golf Preview Section. When he picked up the May 8 edition of the Star he was stunned to see the cutline “Jordan Spieth is only 20 and has yet to win on the PGA Tour, but after a tie for second at the Masters, he could be golf’s future star.”
He sent an email to key executives titled: “Pitiful mistake about Jordan Spieth.”
“I have written before about how I feel your coverage of golf could be better, but this is just a bush league mistake,” Haney wrote. “It looks like much of the story was drawn from the wire, but poor research like this certainly reflects a lack of interest and poor attention to detail on the part of your staff.
“Spieth’s win on the PGA Tour last year (John Deere Classic) was a major story. IN FACT, he had to win a tournament to get into The Masters, where he finished 2nd to Bubba Watson. Any sports intern should know that. Then the mistake is compounded in the sixth paragraph where it says ‘Spieth is still searching for his first win on the PGA Tour.’”
Haney closed out his email noting, “As a former employee I am quick to defend the paper to my peers, but I am sure I will be hearing from my golf buddies about this rookie mistake.”
What really surprised Haney was the nasty response by the Star’s spokesperson:
Malcolm,
Yes, the Jordan Spieth mistake is embarrassing, and of course we wish it did not happen.
I’m not sure what you once did here at The Star, but I bristle when someone who used to work at 1729 Grand writes in to chastise us for an error. Did they not happen when you were here? If not, amazing. Because in my twenty years in this business, I’ve seen them occur at every level: weeklies, small dailies, papers like The Star and Sports Illustrated.
We always regret them, but they are a fact of life in the publishing business.
Perhaps we can discuss further on the course some time.
Haney was stunned by the mean-spirited and defensive response, which resulted in a 22-word correction on Page A-2 of the paper today.
“My wording may have been a little strong calling the mistake pitiful…but it was,” Haney told Bottom Line. “I don’t know why he thinks I have any less of a right to point out a mistake because I am an ex-employee.”
So you want to point out an error in a media story? You might want to think long and hard about it-particularly if you are a former employee.











BAD STAR!
Bad Star, bad! Isn’t enough you drive readers and subscribers away with an increasingly poor product, but then lash out with an inappropriate response to someone who cares enough to keep subscribing!?
KUDOS
Well written and thought out JL.
WRITER SET TONE
Perhaps the Star’s response would not be so sharp if the correction email to them stung a little less? The writer set the tone. When you correct someone, it is always best to thank them first for the story and then say there was an error. You don’t call the mistake “bush league” and say the research was “poor.” Stop putting your opinion and just spell out the facts. Most reporters I work with are thankful for the corrections because they don’t want to make mistakes. I can’t ever recall a reporter being defensive.
WRONG HEATHER!
You are wrong, Heather! (How’s that for tone?)
Even if the email pointing out the numerous errors “stung,” the reporter should have been professional; he should have thanked the emailer for reading his story and caring enough to send an email pointing out the error.
The reader didn’t “set the tone.” The paper set the tone when its writer did a cut-and-paste job without bothering to do any fact checking. The paper’s email response is juvenile.
BLATANTLY OBVIOUS ERROR
Heather, I agree I might have toned it down, but if you follow golf this mistake was about as bad as anyone could imagine. This was no small error and was blatantly obvious. My wife is a casual non-golfing golf fan and she knew it was a mistake because Spieth had played in the Masters, which meant he had won a tournament the previous year as a rookie.
RESPONSE
Was the response from the Star’s sports editor or the Star’s spokesperson? Aren’t those two different people?
Editor